tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post22428737835849474..comments2023-08-24T05:09:24.370-05:00Comments on Blue's World: The Blue Moon Who DiedBLUEGUITARhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09867359536479753976noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-473206819295868552008-11-19T13:03:00.000-06:002008-11-19T13:03:00.000-06:00Thanks Manndeep, its always a pleasant surprise to...Thanks Manndeep, its always a pleasant surprise to hear from u; specially now that u r hard to trace and also no indication of when u will b paying a visit again :)<BR/><BR/>anyways I hope thgs are fine with U :)<BR/><BR/>Praveen Bhai, namaskar and big thanks, makes me feel glad to finally have some danish readership ;)BLUEGUITARhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09867359536479753976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-78195560929969547532008-11-19T12:31:00.000-06:002008-11-19T12:31:00.000-06:00Hello Shashank, Excellent poem. This is really goo...Hello Shashank, <BR/><BR/>Excellent poem. This is really good one: "That night, it rained; a gentle sob with a touch of blue,<BR/>as the drops kissed the moon; but alas, the girl still didn't knew....." <BR/><BR/>Keep it up. <BR/><BR/>Praveen TummaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-14266079628478220802008-11-17T22:33:00.000-06:002008-11-17T22:33:00.000-06:00Beautiful. Poignant. Every now and then when I vis...Beautiful. Poignant. Every now and then when I visit your website, I am never disappointed by the array of posts and your beautiful poems. Really liked this one Shashank, very sweet indeed. Good job. Hope all's well at your end.<BR/>Regards, Manndeep.~manndeep~https://www.blogger.com/profile/16377163304885301564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-84769712206256866742008-10-12T18:12:00.000-05:002008-10-12T18:12:00.000-05:00aaah...and I think I suggested sometimes back that...aaah...and I think I suggested sometimes back that you should try a longer version of poems...i guess this came to you flowing naturally rather than intentionally... i can see from the very start what were you aiming for..and perhaps your idea, the main idea of having someone losing itself (in literal sense of word) for someone else was what you were coming for... 'girl' for a 'moon' was too un-romantic! choose something little imaginative you know... something coinciding the mystic blue moon...<BR/><BR/>rest u know... u don't need appreciation...do you?<BR/><BR/>/LevidLEVIDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16828053776198184675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-62714734158194277682008-09-29T14:01:00.000-05:002008-09-29T14:01:00.000-05:00dhanyawaad sir :)dhanyawaad sir :)BLUEGUITARhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09867359536479753976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8538092.post-74618243160423876832008-09-29T13:55:00.000-05:002008-09-29T13:55:00.000-05:00Hmm.....A more positive note from an out and out r...Hmm.....A more positive note from an out and out romantic!Nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com