Wednesday, May 31, 2006

My Typical Girl

I'm not at ease
When you talk childish

My typical girl.
When your face is weighed
under the thickest of layers
and you come across as a
vocal artifact,
with no sadness in your sad
and the ways you celebrate
your joys is a disgrace.
Annoyance holds to ransom
your identity
that swims along effortlessly
in the sea of fake,
Guided by your guided emotions
you drift along unconciously
without even thinking
that your real
has long been dormant,
But you're still admant
to shrug off the images.
Have to say
When you behave this way
You are irritating and nettling to say the least
My typical girl.

6 comments:

GuNs said...

Another good one from Shashank. You rock man !! This stirs up some weird feelings. I though, dont completely understand what YOU are meaning to convey in these lines.

-PeAcE
--WiTh
---GuNs

BLUEGUITAR said...

I think this one is for the typical girls who show off at every possible opportunity, the gals who r so much buried in thr artificiality that even thr very existence seems artificial and forced upon.
For the gals who are not natural, cant talk sense, with whom its difficult to strike a mature and intelligent conversation.

GuNs said...

Almost a month.
Whats keeping you from your passion for writing man?

Why dont you blog aout your everyday incidents if you cant write something creative like a poem? I am sure you have tons of interesting things happening every once in a while. Share them with the crowd.

-PeAcE
--WiTh
---GuNs

BLUEGUITAR said...

:) :)
Hoped life was as simple as that.....
bit busy with writting a couple of papers with deadline as 1st of july. So once I'm done with that, may b then I'll add a few thgs.
Thanks for ur concern BTW, I hope alls well at ur end :).
Take care

GuNs said...

"Writing papers"?? What kind of papers? Research papers, journalistic papers, project documentation papers...Do tell me what you work as, if you don't mind. I am seriously looking at alternative career options coz I cant seem to like anything about the IT industry that I am a part of.


-PeAcE
--WiTh
---GuNs

Anonymous said...

u know shash this one is gud, right now i feel like writing not my typical boy - shash